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You may know I'm from Italy and you also may have read some of my messages in these forums written in English containing some bad grammar or spelling errors.
What is the purpose of this thread? You have to know that Dakoom, other than beign an active web developer is first a musician, and he have a band called Skullmonkeys created by him and for which he write songs in English language.
The problems usually comes when he doesn't know if a "phrase" is currently a correct "English phrase" or not.
Would you help me then to write down some good lyrics in a correct English?
First example where I would need some help:
Is this all correct?
Thank you so much in advance for any reply!
What is the purpose of this thread? You have to know that Dakoom, other than beign an active web developer is first a musician, and he have a band called Skullmonkeys created by him and for which he write songs in English language.
The problems usually comes when he doesn't know if a "phrase" is currently a correct "English phrase" or not.
Would you help me then to write down some good lyrics in a correct English?
First example where I would need some help:
When I was going into the Hell, I founded her eyes
and I watched
like the Moon see the Sun in his dreams.
I was a fool, I was a dreamer, but she didn't care
Is this all correct?
Thank you so much in advance for any reply!
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